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   Anonymous on January 28, 2003 at 20:23

   ^^;

   heyo, this is ferni ^^;
   i just wanted to say that this poem is really beautiful and in a strange way i can relate to it..
   sorry for prying ^^;
   oh, and i’ll be reading your ‘crimson coronation’ tonight if i have time ^^ i love that fic. but then again i love your writing in general.

   *hides*

   ferni

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     kuroiyousei on January 28, 2003 at 21:46

     : )

     Thanks, ferni……… and you’re not prying……….

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       kuroiyousei on January 28, 2003 at 21:54

       :::Note to self – Type entire message, THEN push “Post Comment” :::

       What else I meant to say was that I’m glad you read it, actually…. I used to write a lot of poetry, and then, a couple of years ago, it just suddenly stopped. But for the last several days it seems to have been coming back until this one hit me today — so I’m very glad to have somebody read it.

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         Anonymous on January 29, 2003 at 00:07

         Re: :::Note to self – Type entire message, THEN push “Post Comment” :::

         I see. XD
         I’m very glad i read it too. It’s pretty. I write poetry all the time.. most of my english language poetry is weiss kreuz related/inspired, by the way ^^; dunno why…
         if you’d like i could post some of my stuff here.. that is if you want ^^;

         ferni-chan

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   Anonymous on January 29, 2003 at 01:46

   ~*~Loverly~*~

   It’s always a pleasure to read your writing and you write poetry as beautifully as you do fiction. This poem was lovely. It has such a lyrical quality to it…I could see it being a song by a power metal band like Blind Guardian or Hammerfall or something. The imagery is vivid and I especially adored the lines:

   Thus by thee the mortal fate whose inky fingers match
   My own for blackness, I shall live, yet in my fear attach

   That gives me all kinds of cool images. A heap of broken images as Eliot might say. This is the good stuff right here. Thumbs up milady.

   ~*~deena~*~

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   yaoi_bunny on January 29, 2003 at 01:58

   Poetry

   Beautiful. ^_^ I love the last line, for some reason. I should’ve known you’d be good at writing poetry, too. LOL. I can’t write poetry to save my life.

   Rock on!

   ~Midori^_~

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     kuroiyousei on January 29, 2003 at 12:17

     Thanks for reading, guys

     This has improved my mental state so ridiculously much… funny thing, that a single poem could make me so happy, but it has. I’m going to edit it out of the message now, though, as burned hands shun the fire and I know all too well that poetry is easily plagiarized online. Thanks again for reading it, minna.
     : )

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   jenovavii on January 17, 2012 at 22:08

   Here. /hands pack of cancer sticks/

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