Circumstances went Destruction James on my bad mood. First, on the way to work, the radio played I Hate Everything About You. Then when I got in here, Pirates of the Carribbean was just starting. When that ended, they turned on Serenity, which is still playing. Also I escalated a really funny stupid customer. Oh, and we are not very busy. It’s not back to the normal level where I can get lots of stuff done between calls, and I expect it will pick up later, but in general I think I am done grouching.
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Dear god, that was SO worth fighting with LJ!
:D :D I’m glad to hear it!!
New Duo icon! ♥
Hot damn, this was such a glorious part. I could read it about 10 more times and still get goosebumps. Part of it is the actual sex stuff, which was written so well, but it’s all the other things that go along with it that stand out for me. The things that are unique to this story, like Duo marveling at all the different sensations.
Favorite lines:
“You’re doing funny things to my heart,” he told him. “And I just got it back.”
“You can have mine,” said Heero, and kissed him again.
In any other story, that would sound so sappy. In this one, perfection. :-) I also like Heero hinting at what he was doing in the shower.
^__^ I’m glad you liked it so much! For once I was actually kindof excited to write a sex scene, because Duo’s sensations were going to make it so unusual; I’m glad you liked that.
Also those lines… so cheesy! And yet I thought they worked really well in the context :D Glad you liked those too! Thanks for your comments ^____^
hawt hawt hawt! I agree with Sharon about the guess-what-heero-was-doing-in-the-shower bit and Duo’s comment about that above which he was sleeping. I’ll admit, I’m a fan of any good lemon… but part of me was (not so secretly now) rooting for no sex. I got my hopes up when Duo was saying he needed all of Heero now… like even wouldn’t be as important as just lying (laying?) with the man he loved *sigh*
But who would I be trying to kid? They’re red blooded males! actions speak louder than words XDDD and their banter at the end was sweet :DD
You know what would have been really great (in an inconsequential sort of way) If we’d known about the amorous neighbors and seen Heero’s and Duo’s desperate attempts to avoid Awkward City with all the wall thumping going on… would be like divine justice (or just plain old pay back) when it’s Heero and Duo’s turn, you know?
It would be nice if Duo thought that just being with Heero was all he needed… but Duo’s been unable to feel stuff for so long that I thought the sex was an extremely logical next step at this point.
That and, as you mentioned, they are red-blooded males XD XD
“Next door’s boyfriend” was mentioned in passing at one point, but not in any important way; you’re right: it would have been pretty funny if they’d been a sort of running joke, wouldn’t it?
Thanks for your comments!
OMG I’m glad LJ decided to work, so I could read this. It was sheer perfection. Not only the sex part, which was amazing and SO TOTALY HOT all by itself, but also all the emotional things. How Duo kept describing his feelings, his emotions. The way Heero acted, like an addict to Duo almost, how he hinted at the ‘shower scenes’, how he OFFERED HIS HEART!!! ♥ I had goosbumps all the way, and it was simply amazing!
I think the neighbours better get used to this, ’cause I have a feeling those two will be at it quite often x)
I am so glad you liked it so much ^___^ Yes, Heero offered his heart! And it’s a good thing he did, because, as we’ll see, once things calm down he has somewhat of a harder time doing so XD
I agree; the neighbors had better just learn to suck it up XD
Thanks for your comments! ^__^
Yes! And LJ recovers in time to read that beautiful piece.
We will triumph!! Nothing will keep me from getting to the end of Plastic!! :D Thanks for your comments.
Totally worth the hassle of lj. Great chapter. *^_^*
^__^ I’m glad you think so! Thanks!
Dawwwww so cute! I love this! :D
They’re definitely such a cute couple
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it!
Ooooh, I really like this one. I think it really enhanced the lemon scene with all of Duo’s reactions to the simple act of feeling. *smile* He hasn’t felt anything in over 80 years, and now he’s overloading his nerves with sexual sensations as well as normal sensations. Very well done descriptions, I really enjoyed this.
*giggle* The neighbors kill me. Although, they had probably been woken up by all of Duo’s shouting earlier. XD XD And Heero’s shower comment is also so amusing. Duo won’t be forgetting that, I’m sure.
Like everyone else… the part where Heero gave his heart to Duo just made me want to melt. So sweet!
I’m glad you liked the description of the sex and all of Duo’s additional feelings. Sex scenes are so tedious to me, but the ones in this story were all important for different reasons, and I’m fairly pleased with them.
Yeah, the neighbors probably wouldn’t even have been annoyed about the loud sex if they hadn’t already been primed by Duo screaming naked on the porch XD
I’m glad you liked the part! Thanks for your comments!