Gold Eyes False

It might not be so bad if we weren’t outside in the rain, and he wasn’t such a complete bastard.

When Sano is forced to live a day as Saitou and Saitou is forced to observe, the resulting realizations are nothing like what they expect.



Unique to this comic: astonishingly ugly art.

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This is Saitou’s office, a prominent character in this story and a shape-shifter: later it grows a chair-rail and a hovering ominous darkness that allows me to ignore every light source around. Very cool stuff.


In full spite of the ugly art and often confusing layout, I’ve rated this comic . What do you think of it?



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Anonymous
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squee!!! I know you aren’t quite satisfied with these pages but they are still pretty! and i love the lightening!! ^_^

FarStrider

orotaku
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LOL!! “Oh. That kind of idiot.” That was great, Fae!!

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Scary. . . I feel so strange, posting here, but I really want to know what will happen if I “attack you.” Well, that and I just noticed another instance of parallelism in the newest GEF page–the ahou/shit responses. Man, anymore parallelism and something is going to explode. . . Is it something like with what you said about Tokio, instinctive and analyzed afterward? I honestly think that’s about the only way stuff like that happens. . . Can you imagine trying to consciously remember all those little details and techniques? Ah, I was also wondering about the two mirror… Read more »

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Woot! Gold Eyes False update, yay!! I’m really enjoying it, despite my petty envy of your talent. Personally, I have the artistic ability of a three-toed sloth with Parkinson’s. (no offence to three-toed sloths or those with Parkinson’s) At any rate, I’m curious as hell to see what happens. Oh! I especially liked where Sano had “his” hand on his head and he glances at it out of the corner of his eyes and quickly drops it ’cause it’s a “Sano” gesture. Very cool. ^_^
Lychee

hishighnesshiko
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*nibbles “Oh, honestly” to pieces*

vihm
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Well, I happened to land at your wwwpage because of sxsas yahoo ring notice that sequel to As the years go up in smoke is complete. And read it again as I barely remembered it and the sequel, and man can you write deliciously. But, as it goes, I looked at your other update posts here and took a look at your DJ. It’s the most hilarious DJ I’ve read ever. I can’t wait for more. The place where Sano and Saitou stood in water back to back could use a scientific diagram about magnetics :D I love your drawing… Read more »

hishighnesshiko
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COLOUR!!! WEEKLY UPDATES!!!!! GEFGEFGEFGEFGEF!!!!!!!

Hee hee, Sano can do Saitou’s job for him. Hee hee.

Hee hee, fuzzing out of kanji so that you don’t have to be specific about all of them.

EYES.

ladyames
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it’s alive! it’s alive! ^__^ sorry, crazy moment there.

yes, you were right, it does look cool in color too.

*snicker* i love that sano gets it right away. XD

and weekly updates?! and and… ok, i’ll stop jabbering now.

love!

meraehl
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This is awesome!

What a good idea, and well executed. I love Saitou’s thoughts on Sano’s on Saitou ^_^;. I’m quite envious of the way you can write funny and interesting dialogue.

Looking forward to more. ^_^

hishighnesshiko
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Saitou’s eyes in the second panel are the most awesome ever. GLARE.

ladyames
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hehe… ^__^

ladyames
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i like the triangle

ladyames
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who is it? who is it? *waits*

ladyames
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pretty purple! *grabbie hands* need more… :P

kikue_mugen
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TYvm faery for ‘gold eyes false’ … been waiting for this one a long time inbetween. Looking forward to the next.

BTW I’m also enjoying “Aku,Soku,Zan(za)!

ladyames
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*sits on hands* will not beg for more… will not beg for more…

ladyames
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i just reread the entire thing yesterday in preparation for today, and, i must say, i’m not disappointed. :D

ladyames
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da ha ha! silly boy.

Anonymous
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Dedra here =P

Haha, it’s so strange seeing “Saitou” acting like this x]

ladyames
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*pokes bag for him* XP

*throws pre-fifty confetti*

Anonymous
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Dedra here =P

Wow, 50 pages! Hotness x] GEF has been great so far, and I love this page haha. Do I hear 100? heh =)

ladyames
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alrighty, i brought the cake, ice cream and balloons. i am ready for a party. XD

Da ha ha… the blush is priceless!

farstrider
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Why do I get the feeling that this won’t turn out well? Oh. . . mayhap because you’re writing it? ^____^. . . .

~FS

ladyames
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oh, the hands in the last panel(s)… nice.

miralee_heen
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Love this page (and love the whole story)! The smoking thing is a good idea.

Miralee (aka Kate. I’m the one who commented on your website)

Anonymous
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Dedra here

Loverly, as usual =) Keep ’em comin’! =P

farstrider
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*SNERK!*

momentsdrift
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Da ha ha

miralee_heen
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Love it!

ladyames
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*snicker* Saitou’s line is the best! XD

ladyames
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*snicker*

farstrider
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!

fe
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wow… riveting dialogue.

dragynsidhe
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I finally catched up. I like!!!

Hee heee, navel.

ladyames
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OH NOES!! O____O

Anonymous
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Dedra =]

Hahaha, most definitely! What a great present ;D Happy Holidays!

ladyames
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O_______O?!?!

Anonymous
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It’s Leah [lovingyouin1963]

At work and it’s a bitch to sign in…

…anywho…

Sanosuke screaming Saitou’s name is a great Christmas present!!!

farstrider
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Yes I can believe that you posted on Christmas Eve and New Year’s Eve because you are awesome like that. . . .If you are still stuck, how did you get the present? I’m really glad that you will find it useful!

As for the page. . . .HEEEE! Sano’s moving pretty fast for a person who was in a coma just seconds ago. . . . ^___^

~FS

lovingyouin1963
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Can’t wait for your surprise! And congrats on the anni — that’s a long time. You stuck to it and because of that, I can still read some good SaiSa =]

Thanks ♥

Leah [bellehimechan]

hishighnesshiko
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Tomato juice all over the floor! We need — MR CLEAN.

Anonymous
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Dedra here

Haha, I love the dialogue and how concerned Sano is ;D Can’t wait for next week!

jasmedra
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Haha man, way to build up suspense! I’m so anxious every week to see what’s going to happen next, I’m gonna die of a heart attack sooner or later x]

jasmedra
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Hahaha. “Helplessly watching everything you did.” (“Namely, playing with my navel” x]) And I like the Saitou looks on the top there =)

lovingyouin1963
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I just went back to read the section when he was messing with his belly button and making his hair like antennae *ROFL*

I do love this story!

Poor, humiliated Sano-kun xD

jasmedra
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Wow. Love it ;D

lovingyouin1963
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OMFG HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ::falls off of chair::

POOR SANOSUKE!

xD

lovingyouin1963
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xD That’s great. Revenge is sweet.

We should hold a funeral for Saitou’s burned antennae, LOL.

lovingyouin1963
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Yeah ^^ Another installment! And right before work. Yayness.

“Though I kinda deserved that one.” — Hey, man, at least he admits it.

lovingyouin1963
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Always like Saitou to cut to the chase ^^